Tj's Rewriting instructions

WALT: We were learning to rewrite in different words

Instructions should have clear, simple steps so you don’t confuse the person reading them.

Can you make these various instructions easier to understand?

Pick up an egg, gently hit it against the side of a bowl and empty the contents into a clean bowl.	Get an egg, carefully hit it against the edge of a bowl and then empty the yog into a clean bowl.
Open the fridge and take out the butter. Take off the lid. Get a knife and use it to scoop some butter. Rub the knife onto the toast.	Go to the fridge and take out the butter. Take off the lid. Get a butter knife and use it to slice some butter. Then rub it onto the toast.
Hold the two shortest sides of paper and bend them together. Squeeze them so that the paper is now in half.	Grab the two sides that are short and bend it together. Push it together so that the paper is now in half.
When you hear the sound of the whistle, move one leg in front of the other as quickly as you can.	Listen out for sound of a whistle. Then walk like you normally but quick as you can like speed walking.
When player One had rolled the die, they should hand it to player Two, who should then roll it too. The person with the highest score moves their counter first.	Player one has rolled the dice, they should give it to player Two, who should then roll it too. The player with the most points moves their counter first.
If you want to turn on the computer, look for the round, lack power button and press it once.	To turn on a computer, look for the black button hold it or press it once then it will come on.
Hold the handles of the scissors and cut along the dotted line, making sure you don’t hurt yourself.	Hold the handles of the scissors and cut along the dotted line. To make sure you don’t hurt yourself
Before you start mixing the ingredients, switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.	Before you begin stirring the ingredients, switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees
Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, being careful not to get any glue on your clothes.	Take the cap off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, be careful not to get any glue on your clothes.
When you have planted your seed, pick up the pot and move it it near to a window where it will get lots of sunlight.	After you have planted your seed, pick up the pot and move it, it near to a window where it will get lots of sunlight