Under the oak tree,kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you.
The billowing Oak, tree sways gently as the chilly air. blows it’s lime green leaves and the oak tree is, nice and bright.
This is a record of my time at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand.
Writing makes sense and the reader can understand it easily. | yes | |||||
Sentences are punctuated. | yes | |||||
The paragraph is about 1 main idea (usually in the first sentences) with more details about it in the next sentences. | yes | |||||
Technical words, juicy language and interesting vocabulary used. | yes | |||||
Sentences are varied - some simple some complex. | yes |