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Thursday, 25 September 2014

The Oak tree


Under the oak tree,kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you.
Oak_tree_in_the_spring-2.jpg
The billowing Oak, tree sways gently as the chilly air. blows it’s lime green leaves and the oak tree is, nice and bright.  

The Oak tree


Under the oak tree,kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you.
Oak_tree_in_the_spring-2.jpg
The billowing Oak, tree sways gently as the chilly air. blows it’s lime green leaves and the oak tree is, nice and bright.  

Monday, 22 September 2014

TJ's Musuem Recount


Trip to the Museum


On Thursday class 6, 7, & 8 went to the museum on the school bus.I find out about the body part about the murad did you know that class 6 and 7 went to find food but they had to find tools our trap’s.

It was so cool we got to do a maori haka to our vites did you know that if you do the pukana it means I will kill you I will get you and eat you for dinner.If there is going to be an earthquake you will see the steam come out of the water.
Another haka is called ke my maori it is a song about a maori madrid it is so cool learning about the parts of the madrid did you that the two poles are the heart.
Writing
makes sense and
the reader can
understand it easily.
yes
Sentences are punctuated.

yes
The paragraph is about 1
main idea
(usually in the first sentences)
with more details about it in
the next sentences.
yes
Technical words, juicy
language and interesting
vocabulary used.
yes

Sentences are varied -
some simple some complex.

yes

Wednesday, 10 September 2014

TJ's HANGI

Hangi

Hi My Name is tj and My Group is reading a book called hangi.This is My Timeline for hangi.Please leave a comment thank-you.


Tuesday, 9 September 2014

TJ USE MY BRAIN USE MY HEART I'M GOING TO BE CYBER SMART

Hi my name is tj and this is use my brain use my heart i'm going to be cyber smart
                   
Mr Burt Korea is an very important thing because that was (USE MY BRAIN USE MY HEART I’M GOING TO BE CYBER SMART).


This can help you cause if you give someone your password they can go on dougey stuff but it was not you and you  will get in trouble not the person that went on it.


Cause it is your password not there it is password to keep safe so no one else come and steals your password  to go on thing that they're not supposed to on!
Being cybersmart means that you think about the footprint that you're leaving behind.For example when you go to play an online game,you do not put down other people playing otherwise you might get reported, for putting down other player

Tuesday, 2 September 2014

TJ Hinaki SL- Part 2

Hi my name is Tj and this is Hinaki Part 2.Please leave a comment thanks.